Thursday, March 6, 2014

Five Sentence Fiction - FURIOUS

  Head pounding and hands shaking, she slams the lid on her suitcase. Tears continue to fall even though she physically tries to will them away. She paces between  nightstand and window, then grabs her things and heads for the door. Stopping mid stride, she begins frantically searching through her purse. She pulls out a well worn love letter and  places it under his forgotten cell phone, and Janet's text asking him what time he'll be over.



7 comments:

  1. Enjoyed this :-)

    ReplyDelete
  2. Now that was a grand way of showing how furious she was. Nice story.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Breaking up is one of the hardest things any woman can do, Well done. Emotional

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. It really is, Robin. Thanks for reading and commenting.

      Delete