Man I'm starving, I hope mom went grocery shopping today. If she did, I'm grabbin' a bag of oreos and a glass of milk and not budging from in front of that TV. I wonder what's on the After School Spe... What the...? Nobody usually even notices when I come home, now I got half the friggin family standin' on the front porch lookin' at me. Wait, what's dad doing home?
Oh no, so sad to think if the outcome of this story. Great story, as in mine the last line clenches my heart.
ReplyDeleteIt is sad to think of the outcome. Knowing in my mind what had happened, it was hard to write it from her unknowing point of view.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Barb.